Pantun – A Great Delight

Hello my friend,

It’s Pantun time again! Yes, that’s right. 🙂

What?  You’re new here and don’t know what a Pantun is? Don’t worry, my friend; that’s totally fine.

My previous Pantun,  Your Heart is My Favorite Playgroundgives you a brief introduction of what a Pantun is. So if you need some background information on this form of literary work, you’re just a click away.  🙂

And to give you a much bigger picture to the genre, my other Pantuns,  In My Heart Your Name is Beautifully Crafted and A Hug From My Heart are there for your delight.

In addition to the introduction I’ve provided in Your Heart is My Favorite Playground, I’d like to give you some more information on a fundamental aspect of Pantun.

It’s its form, or the structure.

I know, I know. You may not like form; it puts limitations to our creative minds, it’s a dull expression of literature, it’s a character strongly associated with old literature and not modern one, blah blah blah.

Yet, my friend, for a Pantun, its form is its beauty. Without a form, a Pantun is both formless and meaningless.

While you may have known that a Pantun rhymes with a-a-a-a or a-b-a-b, bear in mind that the first two lines are the preamble. The last two lines?  They’re the essence of the Pantun. A Pantun reciter conveys the message through the last two lines. In short, they give an intro in the first two lines, but speak the truth in the last two lines.

So they’re you go. It’s not that difficult, is it? Now, I could feel you may want to have your hands on this. If you feel the inclination, please have a go. Those who could write a Haiku, I’m sure they could write a Pantun as well. 🙂

My Pantun for this occasion is called “A Great Delight”.

Yes, you’re right. Absolutely. Hasie’s brilliant art gives another company to my work. Our collaboration has been tremendously great that we both cannot wait for the year to pass until we could finally have more than 100 pantuns for a Pantun Anthology. More on her works? Please visit: and Seriously, every second you have there is time worth-spending.

And the Pantun? Oh, here it is:



Hiding behind the clouds, the moon was out of sight

But the starry sky still made it a lovely night

To see your amicable smile truly makes my day bright

And  to see your gorgeous face is a great delight




74 thoughts on “Pantun – A Great Delight

    • Hi The Strugglerhandbook,

      Thank you very much for your comment. And yes, please do. I’ll look forward to reading your pantun. I’ll be posting a Pantun myself next week, but yes, I’ll look forward to reading yours.

      Have a lovely day! 🙂

      Subhan Zein

  1. Your blog is really cool.
    Its like , so full of life.
    Thanks for dropping by my blog 🙂
    I shall come back soon! You’ve got a nice place in here 😀

  2. A lovely, lovely post. I don’t know why I didn’t “like” it before. I thought I had. I’ll be tempted to try it, I’m sure. I’ll let you know when I have one for you. 🙂

    • Hello my lovely friend!

      Thank you very much for your lovely comment! 🙂

      Yes, you should have a go! It’d be a great fun! Have a lovely weekend, my friend! 🙂

      Subhan Zein

    • Thank you very much, my friend. I hope each of your visits here has been and will always be an enjoyable experience.. 🙂

      Have a lovely weekend, my friend! 🙂

      Subhan Zein

    • Hello, my friend.. This one is Pantun. It should be short, sweet, and beautiful. Four lines are enough.. Have a go, my friend; it’d be fun! 🙂

      Subhan Zein

    • Thank you, Claire! Yes, it’s pantun! It should be short, sweet, and beautiful! 🙂

      Thank you for liking the post, have a lovely weekend, my friend! 🙂

      Subhan Zein

    • Ah, hahaha, thanks, Cha! It’s great to know you’re now a great fan of Pantun! 🙂 I hope you have enjoyed all my Pantuns and the ones that will appear in my visiting posts! Thank you again, and have a lovely day my friend! 🙂

      Subhan Zein

  3. Subhan, I always love coming into a new blog and learning something! Thank you for visiting my little blog, and now, for teaching me about pantun. Your blog is truly from the heart.


    • Hi Elizabeth! Thank you very much for your lovely comment. I hope your visits here have been an enjoyable experience. Please do not hesitate to return if you feel the inclination, because your presence here is merrily celebrated! 🙂

      Subhan Zein

    • Hello, my lovely friend! Oh, what a great thing! Thank you so much to do that! I really appreciate it! 🙂 I hope your visits in my blog have been and will always be an enjoyable experience, my lovely friend! 🙂

      Subhan Zein

  4. The Pantun poet’s passion
    a fire of beauty and youth.
    The softer flame of wisdom
    longs for beauty and truth.

    Enjoy the passion, find the wisdom.

    • Oh, aren’t you a sweet person! Thank you so much! I really appreciate your lovely comment, my friend. I hope your visits in my blog have been and will always be a lovely experience, my lovely friend! 🙂

      Subhan Zein

      • Because you are also a writer you may appreciate my revision (and the need to do it 😉 )
        I realized I missed the form abab. My prose is abcb, so I submit “Wisdom’s elder fashion” to replace c with b.

        Alas it still has no music, but I chalk that up to my preference for prose over poetry.

        Be well.


    • Hello, my lovely friend! I appreciate your kind gesture. I will definitely accept the award, but please bear with me for a little while. I will get back to you. 🙂

      Subhan Zein

    • Thank you very much, Alicia! I really appreciate your comment. I hope you’ll be one of those enthusiastic readers when the Pantun Anthology comes out. 🙂

      Subhan Zein

    • Thank you Bli! Yuk, kita perkenalkan pantun kepada dunia. Di bawah sudah ada dua pujangga yang tertarik untuk menulis Pantun. Kalau ada encouragement dari Bli pastinya akan tambah banyak lagi.. 🙂

      Subhan Zein

      • Sure!
        Wow, that’s a great news. “The more the merrier” :). Then, the project will soon come to reality. I will curate this in my Serendipitous Delight page, if you don’t mind :). There, you’ll find writings mostly written by me (including some Pantun) and some wonderful posts by other friends: All the best Mas 🙂

    • Thank you, my friend! I am glad you loved it! Check out for some more of my Pantun: “Your Heart is My Favorite Playground”, “A Hug from My Heart” for your delight. 🙂

      Subhan Zein

  5. Subhan, I am already an enthusiastic follower of Kofe–So pleased you know you two are collaborating–both so talented. I love this Pantun. So glad you took time to share some more details of the Pantun form with us here today. So glad you found my blog and hope your will click “follow” to keep up with us on our critterly journey, ever eastward.

    • Hello, my lovely friend! Thank you for following me. I hope you have a joyful ride in each of your visits. 🙂 And thank you for the invite; I will surely check out your blog shortly.

      Subhan Zein

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