Pantun: In My Heart Your Name is Beautifully Crafted


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In the blue sky a gorgeous rainbow had just been painted

Two young women were gazing at it with their head tilted

My sweetheart, your presence is merrily celebrated

And in my heart your name is beautifully crafted

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39 thoughts on “Pantun: In My Heart Your Name is Beautifully Crafted

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  3. Horray, i finally find your blog. Blog yang penulisnya suka ngepost puisi-puisi. Puisi-puisinya dalam bahasa Inggris pula. Cool. *excited*
    Thanks for liking and comenting my post Mas, saya lagi agak idle ngeposting nih Mas. Sudah saya follow, maka folback donk πŸ˜€

    • Thank you for your lovely comment! You’re following my blog, so you could come back as many time as you wish. Yes, I do hope that you could visit my blog more often. My sweet friend, in here your presence is merrily celebrated.

      Have a lovely weeekend to you too. πŸ™‚

      Subhan Zein

    • “nice words and nice blog …”-this is what came up after I Google translated your comment above. Well, thank you. Thank you my new lovely friend. And thank you for your kindness to follow my blog.

      Have a lovely day, my dear friend! πŸ™‚

      Subhan Zein

    • Thank you very much. I’m so happy that you enjoyed the poem. I hope that you also smile after reading my other poems and flash fiction.. πŸ™‚

      The poem is a modern version of Pantun, an Indonesian traditional poem. It is my aim to make Pantun famous and be at the same level with Haiku. πŸ™‚

      Thank you and have a great day, my lovely friend! πŸ™‚

      Subhan Zein

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