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If you think real love is the crazy feelings you have on someone,
Then you are wrong
If you think real love is what makes you awake at night and gives you a sense of longing for someone,
Then you are infatuated with childish feelings
Yes, they are part of love but they are not real love.
Do you want to know what real love is? Seriously?
Then look at the sun and gaze at the moon.
From the sun we learn the beauty of illuminating love,
Does the sun ever reduce the amount of light that the earth deserves?
Or does it ever ask the earth to return the favor?
Look at a love like that;
It illumines the entire universe and prospers the earth.
From the moon we learn the beauty of reflecting love.
Does the moon ever distort the light for its own benefit?
Or does it ever deviate the light in its moment of playfulness?
Look at a love like that;
It gives beauty and splendor even to the dark face of the nights.
If you can love like the sun,
If you can love like the moon,
Then you can do miracles.
The dewdrops will bring you pearls from the ocean,
The mountains will ecstatically dance on your lead,
And the sun and the moon will take turn to bow to you.
*Note: Jules Paige, an American-based poet, showered me with her real love last week. She wrote me a poem on my birthday when she didn’t actually know it was my birthday. She had been like a mentor to me on my creative writing journey and even sent me postcards and candies all the way from East-Petersburg!
I am enthralled and humbly thankful for the love she has given me. This poem is dedicated to Jules, while the title is written as suggested by Madeline who left me a beautiful note: “The sweetest spice of life is Love-tinged cinnamon poetry”

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Love is forever…
True, Lindy, very true. Thank you for your wonderful comment. May the Light of Love perpetually shine in your heart. ♥
Lovely thoughts Subhan. Love is the true essence of life and the road to happiness.
Cheers
Dilipnaidu, thank you so much for your kind words, may the Light of Love perpetually shine in your heart.
Sorry I missed your birthday. I know you would have had a good celebration with family and friends.
No, problem, Ian, thank you for your kind wishes
Very late blessings for your Birthday Subhan, but better late than never. Nice poem. It starts a think process, do we really know what true love is? otherwise why there is so much hatred, violence etc.
Some people know what true love is, only a few can implement it wisely in their life, and their main job is to help the majority who do not know what it is in order to eliminate anger, hatred, violence, etc. The world has never been out of the teachers of the world, all we need are students who want to listen.
I hope you had a great birthday!
Thank you, Tammy. You are a very kind girl, many blessings and much love to you
Hi Subhan,
Hope you had a wonderful day.
this poem’s so beautiful!!! WOW.
And by the way, so sorry I missed your birthday. Actually mine’s a few days before yours. We’re both Aquarius
xx
Here’s a toast for two Aquarians! Thank you for visiting, Cha, hope your days are blissfully wonderful!
Happy Birthday…hope this year brings you lots of joy and happines and many more years. this is so beautiful, love is so different than what the show us, is just infinite.
Love like that!
Many blessings to you subhan ! you light up the darkness with your words ! be encouraged to follow your heart ! you shine and the soul of the earth like it
Hi Sandra, thank you, you are one wonderful soul, I need to let you know that I only post every Thursday, I hope this is fine with you, much love to you, Sandra
Beautiful, Subhan! And happy belated birthday, Soul Brother! Much Love to you this year of your Life. xoxoxo
thanks, Zully, much love to you
There’s a deep truth in these words: the selflessness of love, as it were. Beautiful comparison to the sun and moon. No jealousy, no fear. Just light and love.
thanks, Mayumi for being a blessing to the world, much love to you
love the poem
Belated Happy Birthday
thank you, you are one wonderful soul
Foremost, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, dearest Subhan – May Allah bless you with bliss, spiritual enlightenment, creative blessings mingled with abundant of love. Ameen.
Many hugs for your bday, my sweet mate.
A very reflective poem, a blessing – indeed. I truly relished it, thank you!! xoxoxo
thank you, Mashaal, you are a blessing to the world, much love to you
Beautiful words as always Subhan. Happy belated Birthday my fellow fish (I am a pisces too)! x
thank you, I am actually Aquarian, 5 February is Aquarian, but hey, I would love to be a fish, LOL
Oh whoops! We’re still water though
Creativity runs through us, right (apparently)? It certainly does through you!
Your poem is mesmerizing my brother and its message dances within my soul! Thanks for sharing your wisdome Subhan! God bless my friend!
thank you, Wendell, you are a blessing for the world, as always
Wow, this is so beautiful! And you are right! “Agape” is true love, love someone no matter what and not ask them to love you back. Thank you for this beautiful poem.
yes, agape is the true love, the most beautiful and amazing kind of love. thank you for being a blessing to the world
You are so blessed, Subhan. Blessed with words, blessed with vision, blessed with poetry, blessed with loving friends. Thank you for this reminder of what true love is.
Happy belated Birthday.
{{{Hugs}}} Kozo
Thank you, Kozo, you’re a legend!
Precioso poema.
FELIZ DIA DE SAN VALENTIN
Un abrazo
muchas gracias, bonita. un abrazo
A really beautiful poem, Subhan, I absolutely love it. And a happy belated birthday to you!
Thank you, Saudara Halim, much love to you
Thank you Subhan for these words of love and wisdom. I do believe that the whole universe is sentient, and therefore full of love, so your metaphors about the sun and the moon were full of truth…
Beautiful words and thoughts, thank you
Thank you, Valerie, many blessings and much love to you
Yes, I believe this too. Beautifully said. Love is so much bigger than “falling in love”, it is the breath of life itself. And happy birthday to a young, incredibly talented guy who “gets it.” You are unique my friend. Love to you.
Thank you, you are a blessing to the world, and I may have not told you this, I only post on Thursdays, I hope this is fine with you
I’m glad you post at all and that is a good practice or you may not ever get anything else done. Thursday is delightful! Thank you.
Love knows no bounds. Friends who have never met, can bond by the poetic strings of pearly words.
Thank you for your kindness, Subhan
thanks, Jules, much love to you
This is beautiful, Subhan. A wonderful thought and a powerful metaphor for true love. There is so much beauty in the universe and we limit ourselves so much. Words like these help us to look beyond the little.
Happy belated birthday from me too.
Corinne
thank you, Corinne, you are one wonderful soul
Beautiful! Reading a piece of your writing is always like getting a sweet treat!
You are so talented!
And i hope all is well with you? Do let me know!
Sofia,thank you, there’s progress, but very slow, hopefully I can survive, please keep meditating for me yah?
I’ve been through some dramas here myself lately, so i wasn’t able to help anybody these days.
Now i’m back to senses and will renew powerful meditations for you, my friend!
Sorry, will reply your mail today in a couple of hours.
You have a good day there, enjoy the sun, breathe and relax!
We all send you our warm supporting thoughts!
Excellent post, Subhan ! !
Muchas gracias, Ren
What a wonderful entry… So many meanings to the word Love.. and Love this post… But you are right.. We know nothing about Love until we Love the simple things we take for granted every day and learn to love ourselves and Nature…
Love is eternal and everlasting… and love is to share..
I am so happy that this poem demonstrates that shared love between souls..
Wishing you a wonderful Week and Valentines Day
Thank you, Sue. your comments are always delightful, you are a blessing to the world,
I really like that thought! Although the sun itself doesn’t really *choose* to love the earth, the illustration is still a very good one. Thanks for sharing! I wish more people understood the true meaning of love… And, yes. Happy Belated Birthday!!!
thanks, Jessica, you are a blessing to the world
You speak of the deepest depths and the highest height of the love that can be attained or reached..Great to read your lines!
thanks, Soumya
First of all Subhan,I am glad you found time from your busy schedule to post this lovely poem.You are right we do forget what nature gives us for our comfort.Poets should be thanked because they remind us of the sun,the moon and stars etc.You have done that.Many thanks to you.
With best wishes and lots of love,
Regards,
Ranu
Thanks, Ranu, you are one wonderful soul
A belated happy birthday, Subhan!
Thanks, Naomi