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*
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Sweetheart,
Come closer.
Sit next to me.
*
I will tell you a secret
That they don’t tell you in temples,
Recite in mosques,
Or whisper in churches.
*
This morning
I had a fleeting moment of surprise!
*
When I finished my morning prayer
God kissed me on the cheek.
*
It was a gentle kiss
that created the fleeting moment of surprise.
*
But the surprise did not end there
because then He played in my bloodstream
the way sunshine amuses itself on water.
*
*
So beautiful, Subhan. This is my favourite.
Thank you, Adinparadise, you are one wonderful soul. Have I told you that I only post every Thursday? Yes, every Thursday since January 2013. There’s another one coming tomorrow
Dear Subhan, you gave me a delightful fleeting moment of surprise and delight when you said, “But the surprise did not end there
because then He played in my bloodstream
the way sunshine amuses itself on water.”
Just beautiful! You are indeed a talented poet!
Thank you, Naomi, you are one wonderful soul. Have I told you that I only post every Thursday? Yes, every Thursday since January 2013. There’s another one coming tomorrow
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That was amazingly beautiful. I really enjoyed it.
Thank you very much, Cik Abdul Halim. You are one generous soul. I hope life is treating you well and you have a spectacular Wednesday. Many blessings and much love to you.
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Thank you. I wish you blessings and much love too!
Ahhhh, my heart thrums along with your words…..so elegantly told…..
Celeste
Thank you, Celeste. I am humbly thankful. You are one generous soul. Many blessings and much love to you.
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beautiful and uplifting
Hi Madhu,
Thank you very much. Coming from you, it’s very special. Much love and many blessings to you, Madhu..
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Your words are heavenly. Thank you!
Hi Resa,
Thank you. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you.
Much happiness to you, my friend.
Subhan Zein
Your Blog is awesome!
Just lovely, Subhan!
Thank you, Lauren. Many blessings and much happiness to you.
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Very enjoyable read!
Wonderful!
No, thank you! Many blessings to you, my friend!
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Liquid ecstacy! Thanks, Subhan!
Thank you, Kenneth. Many blessings to you, my friend.
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Very nice. While not quite the same it reminded me of when I plucked a tomato from my garden. And tasted the warmth of the sun still in it while I ate it. God is everywhere and by many names, attributes and in the writings of poets and scientists too.
That’s right, Jules. Absolutely. Thank you very much for commenting. I hope happiness reside in the realm of your heart and bring you warmth and love..
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I really love your writing style.
Hi Mobius, thank you very much. I hope your days are filled with love and happiness.
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To feel the presence of the creator of life. Nothing could be better. Wondeful post.
That’s right, Renee. Totally. Many blessings to you, my lovely friend.
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Nice!
Thanks, Ian. Blessings to you.
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You have some following. And the poem, well spun.
S. Thomas Summers
Author of Private Hercules McGraw: Poems of the American Civil War
Hi, Thomas. Thank you for dropping by and commenting. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you.
Many blessings and much happiness to you!
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Lovely, well done
Thank you, many blessings to you.
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Just beautiful!
Thanks, Cindy. Blessings to you.
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Oh I like this one, happiness
Thank you, Christy. Many blessings and much love to you, my lovely friend.
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A perfect read.
Hi Tammy,
Thank you very much for your lovely comment. I hope your days are full of blessings and love.
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Very special in a awesome way…as i read it my heart was blessed by its peace and serenity…a very lovely post my brother!!!!!
Hi Wendell,
Thank you very much for your wonderful comment. I always think of any days when I cannot see around in my blog, but I cannot find any because you’re always here. Thank you very much for your continuous support. May your days are filled with love and happiness.
Subhan Zein
Lovely
Simply loved it 
Hi Dawn’s Stalker. Thank you very much for the comment and for following my blog. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you. Thank you again and much happiness to you, my friend.
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This is simply great! Always like your works, Subhan!
Thank you, Mas Andi. I am humbly thankful. Much happiness and abundant love to you..
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Absolutely beautiful! Love to you, Linda
Thank you, Linda. Much happiness and abundant love to you too.
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This poem is incredibly romantic. And the timing is perfect for me, coming up to my anniversary, because I want to share your wonderful poetry ~attributed to you of course~ with my beloved husband. I really find this poem speaks of finding our primary love with God first, and from that all other wonderful relationships will flow. Thank you so much for sharing your gift here with us all. Blessings, Gina
Great to hear that it is of any use to you. I am so happy to hear that you have just had an anniversary; it must have been wonderful!
Thank you again, Gina. I hope your days are filled with abundant love!
Subhan Zein
Not bad, was interested in how you wanted to end that but you let her down nice and gentle
Thank you, I hope I could write something better than this next time.
Much happiness and many blessings to you, my friend..:-)
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That gave me chills of excitement and happiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for your wonderful comment. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you. Much happiness to you, Chatter Master..
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Ah no, it has never disappointed! And much happiness to you! What a wonderful thing to wish for someone!
Lovely poem as I have come to expect from you. Your talent is amazing!
Hi Artzent. Thank you very much, my lovely friend. Abundant love to you..
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like like like!!!
Thank you, my friend. Many blessings to you..
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Beautiful! That’s how God wants us – to infect us, and have His way with us! I’m glad the surprise didn’t fleet too quickly.
Yes, that’s right. Totally. God is infectious.
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How lovely. Thank you Subhan
No, thank you. Much happiness and many blessings to you, my friend..
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Very fine. Everything takes on life.
Hi Bumba,
Thank you for your kind words. Much happiness to you, my friend..
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beautiful thoughts…you are so very gifted in bringing a much wanted smile to one’s face =) “the way sunshine amuses itself on water.” instant glorious image…wonderful comparison =)
Hi Queridaj,
Thank you so much. Great to see you back here. Awesome. Thank you again and many blessings to you..
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This is so beautiful, Subhan. “God kissed me on the cheek,” made me smile.
Adinparadise, thank you! Many blessings and lovely day to you, my friend!
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nice use of words
Thank you. Much happiness to you..
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This was beautiful and touching, and I enjoyed it very much
Thank you Penescapes. I am humbly thankful and really appreciate your comment.
Many blessings and much happiness to you..
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Very sweet!
Hi Naomi,
You always come with a sweet comment. Thank you. You are one generous soul. May abundant love and happiness always be with you, dear.
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Calm and serene , fills the mind with divine peace.
Hi Nikunj,
Thank you very much for your kind comment. You are one generous soul. May blessings and happiness fill your days, my dear friend. I am so glad we have made our acquaintance..
Namaste,
Subhan Zein
I rEally like this!
Thank you, Kharma. Many blessings and much happiness to you, my lovely friend.
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he?
Yes, “He”.
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oh my say it was for me
I wish.
Yes, it’s for you too, Margo.
Many blessings and much happiness to you.
Namaste,
Subhan Zein
Beautiful!
Thank you, Rosy. Much happiness and many blessings to you.
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Delicious!…. taste on tongue.
Oh, wow, what a taste.
Much happiness and love to you.
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Beautiful…the ending just beautiful
Thank you, Boomiebol. You are one generous soul. Many blessings to you.
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