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Get Drunk Near the Sun
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My sweetheart,
Open your eyes and listen to me:
I have an idea to pass our lonely day
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Let’s go outside for a little magic
I will hold your hand
And we’ll start striding
We’ll get drunk near the sun
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When the golden falcons meet in the sky
It’s time for us to sing sweet songs to God
It’s time for us to get drunk near the sun
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As we lose control and start dancing
God will merrily join us
with Her Sublime flute
and magnificent tambourine.
It’d be a lot of fun!
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really don’t know how i ended up here, but glad i did! loved this
I am glad we have made the acquaintance. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you.
And many blessings to you, my lovely friend!
Subhan Zein
God definitely has both male and female characteristics–if at all. I love the “golden falcons”…:) and the idea of getting drunk near–but not under–the sun. Beautiful, and flippant last line, too.
Hi Charron,
Thank you very much. I am humbly thankful. Many blessings to you, my lovely friend!
Subhan Zein
buona (*) domenica
This is so sweet and it’s such a unique thought, your poetry has such originality! Most writers are so cliché and they can’t find anything to say that hasn’t been said. Don’t ever stop writing, your words will take you far (:
Also thank you so much for following my blog, it’s a great compliment. Have a lovely day ♥
Thank you very much, Victoria. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you and that you continue enjoying my blog. Thank you again and many blessings to you, my lovely friend.
Subhan Zein
I love those words.
Thank you, Mas BNuhgroho. Thank you for your comment, I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you and that you will continue enjoying my blog. I wish you a lovely day !
Subhan Zein
Pleased to meet you Subhan, and thank you for leading me to this delightful treat! You have a unique and welcoming voice ~ Sending sparkles your way today !! ~ RL
Thank you, Robyn. Thank you for your visits. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you and that you will continue enjoying my blog in each of your visits!
Subhan Zein
Thank you Robyn! Best wishes to you too!
May happiness reside in the realm of your heart and bring warmth and love to your soul.
Namaste,
Subhan Zein
Namaste ~
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Sublime – this is glorious
Thank you, my lovely friend.. I’m humbly thankful.
Subhan Zein
playful and sweet with sprinkles of fun ….
Thank you, Isadora! I appreciate your comment!
I hope your visits here have been and will always bee a joyful ride, my friend!
Subhan Zein
very beautiful! loved reading your poem! ^_^
Thank you, Rebecca! I am so happy that you enjoyed it! I hope you always enjoy your visits here!
Subhan Zein
I will! I will! ^_^
Beautiful poem and photo.
Thank you very much, my friend!
Subhan Zein
Beautiful one, Subhan Zein!
Getting drunk near the sun is quite an exciting and unique idea!
Just habouring such an idea in the mind is already fun!
Keep up the creativity!
Yes, you are right! Thank you for your wonderful comment!
I am glad that you loved it!
I hope your visits here have been and will always be an enjoyable experience.
Subhan Zein
Excellent poem that is representative of the current season of spring known for sun and love. The love here can be thought of as romantic or a simple love of life.
Thank you for your wonderful comment,Frances, and thank you for following my blog as well. I hope your visits here have been and will always be a joyful ride!
Have a wonderful weekend!
Subhan Zein
Losing ourselves in the joy of this sundance–fabulous way to connect in love with another!
Hi Granbee! Thank you very much! I am so happy that you loved the poem!
Have a wonderful weekend, my lovely friend!
Subhan Zein
what a poem!!!! your love poems are amazing subhan. Yes God will certainly join such beautiful company
Thank you very much, Sarmishta. Coming from you, it feels like winning the Nobel Prize for Literature..
Subhan Zein
Ahh, so this is what I’ve been missing! Lovely poetry, Subhan! Thanks for the invitation… I’m delighted to be here
Hi Ayasonice,
You are DEFINITELY my new friend!
Thank you so much for being so generous with commenting on my blog.
I hope your visits here have been and will always be a joyful ride. Thank you again and have a lovely day, my friend!
Subhan Zein
That is beautiful Subhan!!
Thank you, Sofie! I really appreciate your comment! I hope your visits here have been and will always be a joyful ride!
Have a lovely day, my friend..
Subhan Zein
You amaze me with every poem!
Really? Seriously? Oh, wow! I’m so happy that I amazed you. I hope one day an agent and a publisher will say the same thing to my poem anthologies. I am working on several at the moment.. So wish me luck, my lovely friend!
Subhan Zein
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Hi Nancy, thank you for your link. I will be checking your blog. I hope you enjoy mine!
Subhan Zein
Wow, i need to see my sweetheart for a little dancing in the dining room! Or maybe in the back yard! Thanks for this light and lovely verse!
Yes, I think you should do it with your sweetheart!
Subhan Zein
………..Let’s go outside for a little magic
I will hold your hand
And we’ll start striding
We’ll get drunk near the sun…………..
mmmmmmmmm
and what does that ‘mmmmmmmm’ mean, may I ask?
Subhan Zein
mmmmmmmmmm, is that I like
Awesome, man!
Really love this. And, really, if you think about it, God’s pronoun really should be of feminine gender, although, God, I believe is sexless. When you think about things like, “Who has the ability to give birth to a Universe?” It would be God. And I’m sure she is a beautiful Mother! 
Hi Robert! Thank you! I’m so happy that you loved it, my friend!
Yes, you are totally right. She’s the beginning and the end. Everything comes from Her and everything will return to Her. Innalillahi wa innalillahi rajiun as the Arabs say..
Subhan Zein
I love it!
Hery Santosa
Alhamdullilah, thank you Bli.
Subhan Zein
God is indeed beyond the confines of male and femaie and I agree that current social/religious norms portray God as male…
No one says it better than Cik Eric Alagan.
Subhan Zein
refreshing!
Thank you very much! I hope your visits have been a joyful ride!
Subhan Zein
Very touching poem with a unique flavor…i enjoyed it much!
Thank you very much, Wendell! I am so happy that you loved it!
Subhan Zein
Beautiful!
Thank you, thank you very much!
Subhan Zein
Hi,
Very nice.
Well, thank you!
Subhan Zein
No, I agree with you. God trancends our concept of male and female. He is above all.
That was an interesting one. You have given God a feminine personality?
Hehe, God is sexless, Ian, isn’t that right?
In my view, the pronoun we use to refer to the God is actually bounded by the limitations of our linguistic perceptions as well as our social norms. Feel free to disagree though. 