This is an English self-translated excerpt from my novel, Malula. It’s spoken by the main character, Wijaya Kusuma, to his partner, Jennifer Frazer.
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Sweetheart, I flew to heaven last night
In there, I saw your beautiful eyes
I have returned to the earth just now
And I see heaven in your beautiful eyes
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All I can say is how great chemistry these characters must be having. Oh god I really want to know.
Thank you very much, Jitendra! Thank you very much for your visits in my blog. I hope you had a joyful ride here!
Subhan Zein
yes of course and I want you to critic mine too if you can take out some time I will be glad
Which one is your blog?
Subhan Zein
click on my name and you will reach
Thanks for letting me camp out in your blog for a little while. I had a great time and tried to leave my campsite as clean as when I arrived. I’ll be back!
This is really sweet!
Hi Naomi,
Thank you very much!
Subhan Zein
Sweet!
Thank you!
Subhan Zein
sweet expressions.
ps: honoured that you liked my poem. thanks.
Hi Selasie,
Of course I do. They’re wonderful!
And thank you for following my blog. I hope your visits here have been and will always be a joyful ride.
Subhan Zein
Buon mattino Subhan, lo sguardo è la bellezza dell’anima.
Deliziosa domenica
Mistral
Buona Giornata,
Thank you for your comment. I hope your visits here have been and will always be a joyful ride!
Subhan Zein
So, so beautiful – I wish you lots of success with your book
Indeed this is beautiful [:
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Thank you for reblogging Lisa! I hope your visits in my blog have been and will always be a joyful ride!
Have a wondeful day!
Subhan Zein
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I wish you reat luck in publishing this beautiful novel. Beautiful, pure honest feelings about love
Thank you very much Ronnie! I am humbly thankful!
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You can be a playwright, or a silver screen script writer.
Beautiful words….
Thank you very much, my lovely friend!
Subhan Zein
How beautiful and romantic!
if the rest of your novel is as beautiful as this, I’ve no doubts it’ll be a best seller! 
Aw, thank you very much, Gabrielle!
I hope the second version of Malula will make a bestseller.. 
Subhan Zein
Thanks for visiting,
keep writing,
share it you could…check out poets rally and poetry picnic at blogs…
Thank you, I hope your visits here were a joyful ride!
Subhan Zein
Deep!
Thank you, my friend!
Subhan Zein
The eyes are the path to the soul. They mirror what our hearts are saying.
There is no greater way to into the spirit of someone then through their eyes.
They say so much…
A beautifully poetic description.
Namaste,
Isadora
Thank you again, Isadora!
Subhan Zein
Wonderful!
Thank you again, The Blazing Trail! I appreciate your first comment as much as the second one!
Have a lovely weekend, my friend!
Subhan Zein
Simply lovely…so poetic and romantic!
Thank you!
Subhan Zein
It’s too bad that the spirit of love often ebbs in our current generation. It would be wonderful if after 40 years of married life he could repeat those words with conviction.
Hi Ian, yes, I guess your right, I find it peculiar that young people in Australia do not express this kind of stuff . So it was a bit difficult for me to write the novel, actually because the female character, Jennifer Frazer is an Aussie girl, born and bred. And if I am going to submit the novel to a larger publisher in Indonesia, I guess I should take this cross cultural issue into account to suit it nicely to the character and plot of the novel.
And your second sentence is truly inspirational. It’s wisdom! Thank you, my friend!
Subhan Zein
That photo … the sentiments in your peom … just beautiful beyond words.
Thank you very much, for your lovely comment my friend! I wish you days full of happiness and blessings!
Subhan Zein
love it !!! The passion within the simplicity of it, is just wonderful . xxx
Aw, thank you very much, my lovely friend! I’m so glad that you loved it!
Subhan Zein
Short and sweet and most effective in expressing the joy of seeing all that perfect love in the beloved’s eyes. Wishing you all success with your new novel.
Hi Granbee,
Thank you very much for your lovely comment!
I wish you days full of happiness and compassion.
Subhan Zein
Awesome and endearing!
Thank you!
First, I thought it was a bit corny, but then your comment made me think otherwise.
Have a lovely day, my friend!
Subhan Zein
Reading this, I could still remember their affection portrayed in the novel. Lovely!
Hery
Have you read Malula yet, Bli?
Subhan Zein
Yes, Mas. It’s very good to learn many good things from the novel. I love how love (universal and personal) twists with a search for balance. That’s a strength and I’m proud of you!
This is full of love and beauty Subhan…I need an English translation of your book–give them a rush job!! LOL
Ah, hahaha! Thank you very much, Jeannie!
I will nail an English publisher first and will tell them that Jeannie my friend wants to get the translation to be completed as soon as possible, I think they won’t mind, hehe.. 
Have a wonderful day, my friend!
Subhan Zein
So proud to know a wonderful writer. And happy to have found you my friend!
Thank you very much my, friend! I hope that your visits here have been and will always be a joyful ride!
Subhan Zein
You do not disappoint my poet/writer! Cheers and good tidings!!!
Beautifully crafted…
I will have to ask Jennifer Frazer whether she wants to second your opinion
Subhan Zein
Great!!!
Itill be, it´s, a good novel
Hugs
Great! Thank you very much!
Subhan Zein
Congratulations on the novel and all your great stories.
I am sure that reap enormous successes along this life.
An affectionate greeting.
Muchas gracias, Bonita!
Subhan Zein
When less is more
Beautiful as ever 
Thank you very much, Aitor!
Subhan Zein
short and sweet, lovely
Thank you brother!
Subhan Zein
Hi,
Beautiful words.
Thank you my friend!
Subhan Zein
Poetic
Thank you Pak Cik!
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How lovely…
Thank you
Subhan Zein